Wednesday, February 14, 2007

Story So far....... 2

(Those who have not read part 1 can read it here)
Next day she came online and found him waiting for her, and he burst with a question "why are you late?" she said oh was waiting for papa to go to sleep, they continued talking to each other, she asking about his job profile and he about her education and all. And never did they asked each other's age. They got to know that both reside in opposite corners of country. She was relaxed that she won't be asked by him to meet as every other tom, dick n harry did. Any how he never did so.
Second day he told her about his disability and was wondering whether she will continue to be his friend or not.
She liked his honesty and ready to take challenges attitude, she admired his way of struggling with life, she liked his mature and sensible talks never sugar coated or misguiding her. He was always ready to help her in studies. He use to send her poem composed by him, Once he wrote her “

I cannot ease your aching heart,
Nor take your pain away,

But let me stay and take your hand,
And walk with you today!

I'll listen when you need to talk,
I'll wipe away your tears
I'll share your worries when they come;
I'll help you face your fears

I'm here and I will stand by you,
Each hill you have to climb
So take my hand, lets face the world,
Live one day at a time!
You're not alone, for I am still here
I'll go that extra mile

And when your grief is eased,
I'll help you learn to smile!

He kept on sending her poems and she loved reading them a lot but one day he wrote to her

As silent as sky,
With soft clouds rolling by
Who has peeped into my heart?

Darkness is over
May be forever
Like a sunshine
Touching the earth

Filled with joy;
My heart re-joys
The tender feeling of oneness
I melt and cheer
As Sorrow disappear

When you fold me in your arms and caress
Be with me, wherever

O my silent love divine
A dream come true
I rub my eyes to see that you are mine

From his poem she felt as if the other person behind the screen is getting attracted to her and she was able to make out of the talks which were getting passionate now, although she liked him but that doesn’t mean to get into any relationship. She thought of controlling situation at that very moment as she didn’t want to break anyone’s heart at later stage. She did not want to play with anyone’s emotions but neither does she want to loose his friendship which was genuine enough. She very genuinely mailed him what she her thoughts for him. He replied

I was cold and hurting
Lost out in the night
Wandering and searching
For heaven's light
I saw the night sky clearing
When you spread your rainbow wings
But little did I know
What joy you would bring
For that moment
a friendship did start
You wipe away my tears
And sheltered my heart
I blessed the day God
Sent him from above
But then I grow fearful
For I had fallen in love
I told you this feeling
As what did you say?
You said you like our friendship
And that’s how it will stay
I cried for friendship
I thought I lost
But then felt your warm, gentle hand
You then whispered in my ear
That by my side
You’ll forever stand

It continued for one and half year, they became best net pals, every weekend she use to come back from hostel share her college happenings with him, take advice on her subject matters, he use to share his office happenings and would give her every possible help in studies. If she is stuck up with any programming only resort for her was to contact him.

They exchanged their phone numbers but never did they call each other.
One day he disappeared from net totally, every weekend she use to log in to look for him but there was no trace of him. It started effecting her studies also, she was not able to concentrate in her college and looked lost somewhere, little did she realize that she is missing him badly. Every Saturday, Sunday she use to connect to internet every 10 or 15 minutes to find out his traces but he was no where.
She wondered whether he is not ill seriously or might have met with some accident, her thoughts were taking her no where. She thought of making him a phone call but could not take courage to do so. She use to wonder “Don’t know how he will feel or react to her phone call” as they never called each other. She didn’t knew what to do.

One fine day she took it no more and made her heart firm to make a phone call to him. Now there was a dilemma whether to give a call at residence number or office number, She felt it won't be good to call him at home phone so she decided she will call at office first as at home she might not be able to handle her parents asking any questions. May be she might come to know from office whether he is coming to office all these days or may be he is ill.
With sinking feeling, shaking fingers, she dialed number, cut it before it could be connected. Took a long breathe, gained back her courage, said to herself just a matter or few minutes and she will come to know the truth.

She dialed, phone was answered at fourth ring. "Hello" "who’s it" she heard a male voice, she can hear her heart beat growing faster and on knowing that it was no other than "him" on phone she almost scolded him, where was he all these days can't he inform her, leave her a mail or call her. Then she realized who she was to say all this. She felt embarrassed and kept a sudden mum, other person just managed to gave a little laughter and said sorry was very busy in office, some deliveries and all but don't worry will meet you online tomorrow. But he could feel the passion in her voice and she was surprised on her own gesture and feelings, she realized this isn't a normal feeling. She has developed a strange feeling towards him, she wants to be with him most of the time, want to talk to him all day. With all these feeling she went to sleep.

Few more online chats happened between both of them and then one day (after regular chatting of 3 years a question popped up)
He: If we are compatible to each other can we not stay together and spend our rest of the life together?
She: Is this possible?


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To be continued.....


And this marks my 100th post on blogspot :)


Although I wanted to post whole story in part 2 but time limitations so didn't got time to complete it. Hopefully will post final part soon


So all my blog friends


A very Happy Valentine's Day


From

Preeti and Sachin

18 comments:

Mehak said...

Happy Valentine's Day to the Bhandari's.....am loving this lovey-dovey story...so you better post the final part soon...& hey congrats for your 100th post!!!

Ashish Gupta said...

part 2 of the story:

And they happily lived beyond eternity.... :">


THE HAPPY END!

Ashish Gupta said...

btw. sorry could not contact you guys - busy tha but aisa bhi nahi hai ki time bilkul hi nahi tha.
had some work at hand to take care of, plus aajkal ekdam tight, rigorous schedule chal raha hai - swimming, jogging, gym! :P

Pinks said...

hi...had a lot to catch up on ur blog..sorry for being completely outta touch..nice story there..am waiting for the next part..

Colors said...

Hi..Happy Valentine's Day. The story is very interesting, I hope it doesn't have a sad ending!
Congrats on the century :)

The Bhandari's said...

@Mehak..... thx a lot dear, yup will try to post part 3 ASAP

@Ashish.... hahahahaha... You completed the story before it has started :P anyways lots more to come to this .. so keep watching this place and hmm I understand your tight schedule Swimming,jogging ahaan :D

@Pinks.... thx buddy, surely take your own time

@colors... wish you the same :) ending ........umm lets see how it goes and what all is in store :) keep watching

anks said...

nice.... why do i get the feeling this story is a true one?

AlterinG Abhishek said...

heya!!
wow..
u have amazing blogs!!!

(and if your guessing where do i land up from...
well u commented on a pic by be on my photo blog where Viewer also blogs!!!)

and the reply to you comment repeated here for youease..
:PP

"
@ The Bhandari!!
Heys..
this is posted abhi abhishek..
:P
and me from Chandigarh itself
Modern complex.. if u from panchkula!!

and its a big surprise when you say that chandigarh does not have a railway station and panchkula has one..
the panchkula side has come up in the last 5-7 years only!!!
"

Ricky said...

Wow!! Poetry within the story, now this is very unique. The poetry is really very romantic to say the least.

You captured the dilemma of the protagonist very well, about calling or not because first call to someone who you have not met is always very difficult.

The story looks very real. Let's see what possibility she choose :-)

The Bhandari's said...

@Anks... thks dear , am no match to what you write, and this is just first try don't know what to say, let me see how well can I give it a finishing touch

@Abhishek... Welcome to our place(Sachin and Me)Thx a lot and good to know you too are from chandigarh.. you too have got good number of blogs, I just checked them , will read them ASAP and the other reply I commented on ur blog itself :D

@Ricky... thx, I captured and now am myself in dilema how to take it further :D hmm I need to think and put further :)

Ashish G said...

hi Sachin, this is Ashish, thanks for posting such nice comments on my blog. Your love story is great, may God bless you forever.

sthupit girl said...

I hope this willl have a happy ending. I hate sad ones. Nice one there.

All my love.

Navjot Kashyap said...

Congrats for the 100th post..
Waiting for the 3rd part of the story...
Poetry in this part is very good...

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Juneli said...

Sorry for coming here late.

I hope you too had a wonderful V'day.

very well manages and organized blog. It's really looking nice.

And congrats for the 100th post. :).

so here too story going on. Great! Will read it.

Deepak Jeswal said...

Belated V'Day wishes to you as well... but then the wishes r that u two hv a life long Valentine's Day :D

Your blog seems familiar, hv i stepped in here before too?

The Bhandari's said...

@Juneli... thx for visiting, and thx a lot that you liked the layout, this is a combined effort of me and sachin although template taken from Scissors full credit's to them, we jut did little modifications to make it according to our needs :) yeah some how managed a century... yup a story but very amatuer one and just trying to write as this is my very first attempt on story writing and am not a story teller :)

@Deepak Jeswal...welcome here, thx for the lovely wishes, ummm familiar may be coz every second person writes these days :D sorry I cannot recall if u have come before for that I need to browse through my comments section :D , but will like it if you become a frequent visitor, once again very warm welcome to our blog

~preeti-Sachin

faith said...

wow! interesting.. waiting for next part.. i wish for a happy ending :)